Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Rover 04-11-2008 07:31,   ... Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :)  I'm stuck with this story, but can't tell what is wrong with it, so I posted it to have opinions...So, what bothers you the most is the monologue and the constant use of 'I', thank you for pointing that out.  And yes, this is not finished, but I don't know how to go on :(   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story