Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Roadkill315 04-10-2008 07:39,   ... Nice start, got the questions churning in my mind fast... reading on so many sentences starting with the word, "I"... great story line, interesting idea for the kid character. His motivation for killing his dad in the end didnt seem to fit well, needs more to justify the act he is coimmitting in my simple mind.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story