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04-10-2008 07:09,
You are very talented, in my opinion (though, I dunno what it's worth). You're rapidly becoming a favorite author of mine (here in Storiesville). Although the story wasn't impressive, your writing talent transcends it. I thought it was a close to perfect balance between narration and dialog (as is evident in all of your writing).
On to the next stories^^.