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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by ThomasP3 04-08-2008 10:12,   ... I liked the 3rd seen very much, very descriptive, and created a vivid picture. The first two were very good but some of the descriptions could have been shortened. Example "The feelings she was experiencing at the moment were incomprehensible". Could have been shrotened to say "Her feelings were incomprehensible". All in all, very good.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story