Awakening of Minds (part one)

So there I was, looking once more at the device...

The Beast and the Wicked Witch

tale as old as time true as it can be She...


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Posted by R.E.Potter
04-07-2008 08:06,
 
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That was a crazy story...it was hard to read the drunken slurs of the two characters, and Im not even sure I understood the ending....aliens melting? I mean, it wasnt a bad story,,it was just hard for me to kinda get in a flow.
 
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