Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by thirteen 04-06-2008 00:04,   ... You have got something here.Just way too much in such a shorter piece.Maybe make it longer, and work on the grammar.But nice try and keep at it.I had the same problem on my first story.You will get there.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story