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04-05-2008 04:44,
Very nice. I may have made a comment about writing an extensive background or history in a story in another post. If it was mine you saw, my point ws I don't prefer it all up front. Rather I think it adds more to the readers enjoyment if you unfold it along the way creatively in the story.