Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Rams117 04-04-2008 18:28,   ... I like the idea. It's just jumbled up and needs to give a few less answers to make it intrigueing (Did I spell that right?). Another thing when your writing try to show us the background in your story maybe through a conversation or a characters thoughts instead of just directly telling us.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story