Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Roadkill315 04-04-2008 09:15,   ... I guess it ended abruptly fro me. She died, a description of cause, and no more. Thinking... maybe work the girl that died in the orphanage into the story earlier or throughout and have the only revelation at the end be she did it. Great story idea, writing was engaging.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story