Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 04-04-2008 01:05,   ... I like this, you write very well... if you ask me though, you should remove the reference at the end of a girl ghost, and have the point of the story be more about the dream and its abstract premonition of danger. The ending didn't sit well with me, but the story was well told   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story