Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Roadkill315 03-30-2008 15:05,   ... I thought the first paragraph was weak in effort to grab the reader; rather the second one did this better so perhaps flip-flop them. Otherwise I enjoyed the story, thanks.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story