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03-30-2008 11:35,
Wow, after an hour of reading, I finally finished. Didn't want to stop after I got going. This was a very complex piece of writing, and very well written and structured. It was hard to even find a flaw in the writing skill, not that I was trying to find any mind you. But It was a tad hard to keep up with though, being so complex. I enjoyed it but I didn't really understand it at the same time. You have a unique style of writing and have a clear talent. In the future, you may have to find a more suitable audience if you write anymore stories like this( no disrespect to my fellow mates, but it was a tuff story to really relate too)... Science fiction is my weakest link however. What I mean by that is its hard for me to become part of the story if its to complex for my mind to handle. To sum it up,,,this story might be to well written for this site.