Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by lobiva nadha 03-29-2008 18:00,   .. Thank You Rover,,, actually this was a story I wrote when I was in the 6th grade in school. I just wanted to show this to everyone here and see the comments which are made.   Well.. i myself can see the that it can be written a lot better than this.   So now I can find out the change in my English Language.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story