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03-29-2008 14:16,
I have to say I agrea with Baethan Dawn. Each writers style is different. I think that sometimes the reader sometimes forgets that they did not right the story. So what they see as imperfections or something that seems to be missing as far as details are not necessarily wrong. Its what he or she would have done themselves. So what I'm saying is however way the writer wants to develop the character, the setting, the whole story. Its the way the writer themselves want to do it.
It was a great story and I myself would like to be able to write a story like this.