Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by The_Gimp 03-28-2008 08:40,   ... Hmmmm foreshadowing wasn't bad, but please reformat the text and correct the typos, it is hard to read because of them. The idea is cool, I would only suggest to add some more details and it would be awesome! Great try nonetheless! 3.5/5!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story