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03-27-2008 16:56,
This was interesting... I found the end a little strange. So he joined with the ghosts? If the kids couldnt see the ghosts and hands pass through them, how did the ghosts pull them off the bridge? Those were my fisrt thoughts after I read this. An entertaining read, good job