The Lord and The Pink Skunk 3 Chapter Nuevo Revelations

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Posted by Sad Sara
03-26-2008 18:11,
 
If 'ifs' and 'buts' were candy and nuts
Then everyday'd be Christmas 
 
But what if my poetic mind  
Starts to go blind -But what if it doesn't? 
What if it catches moments in time and slows them down to tick within the mind at any speed yer wish? 
Poetic Highways have bumps, that's why there's an 'oh shit' handle. Juss hang on, or take another path. Aye believe when I say that if yer continue down the road which yer are on yer juss might end up where yer headed. Uh-oh yer mused me again. Yer like doin' that huh? 
 
Road Destruction  
 
While driving down poetic road  
I see a sign that reads  
Thought destruction up ahead  
But still my mind proceeds  
 
I try to shift creatively  
But as I'm changing gears  
A warning sign of pettiness  
Now suddenly appears  
 
Imagination's forced to stop  
Since there's no other lane  
Then my vision is obscured  
By salty falling rain  
 
I try to turn, but it's too late  
And as our thoughts collide  
I wonder why you can't shut up *not yer 
And just enjoy the ride  
 
I Like yer Poem
 
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