Marks Trilogy Part 1 - A Secret Life The smell was almost overpowering and it hit them as... Birth of the White Buffalo The bell hanging from the handle of the door rang,...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 03-26-2008 16:37,   ... Sorry about not reading it sooner. I saw your message, and went straight to this.     Now let's see, I'll be honest and say I actually never really liked stories about aliens, but this one was incredible. I really enjoyed it, from the different behavior they portrayed.    Your dialogue seems quite realistic, as well as your imagery is pretty detailed. Everything in between is extraordinary as well, I mean this was an excellent story. For some reason I found a lot of anxiety in the story, not sure why, but it was especially at the end with the gem. He seemed anxious to know.    Well, I'll say it again, this was very well written and really enjoyable.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story