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03-26-2008 10:50,
I see why not too many people have commented on this piece. It's pretty hard to decipher (as is most of your work Egoist). I sometimes feel your work is "too deep" and deep water scares most. So one just dips a toe in... and maybe both feet after a while...
I need to know if the words you chose are the exact ones you wanted, and that you know what each word's definition implies, so that you know how exactly each phrase is affecting the meaning of your poem...
Oi! I'm just way too dumb to get this is all ^^
Here's what I've got:
There are two groups, those that are persistent and those who are resistant. But those two words can mean different things
persist: to insist, and instigate, just keep at it until you get what you want
resist: can mean to stand firm (in what you believe in for example) or to actually initiate some kind of action against... so you see I dunno!
OR this is simply making reference to the U.S.A.'s arrogant trust in itself as practically leader of the globe.
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