Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Tombcool 03-26-2008 10:11,   ... @Dirkin and Tarhead    I know it was rushed, there was a word limit I had to keep it to. I should've mentioned that, but about your points...    1. Teacher expelled her intending to go to the principals office, but she began to cry as I said in the story, and ran out of the school. She was just too upset to handle anything further...I thought that was obvious?     2. Remember how Nathalie talked in front of her mother (the barista) at Starbucks? Well that gave the mother and father some time to set up the ending the way they did.    But I agree with both of you, it was too compressed, and i'll probably fix it in the future.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story