Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 03-25-2008 20:28,   ... I think this story is good, well written for a first effort, good punctuation and grammar. I think certain things didnt add up for me plotwise... A teacher that expells a student on the spot? No taking her to the principals office? I also found the stage corpse and parents note being set up under the assumption she would go there after the pier to be a bit of a stretch... I suppose the parents would have kept trying if it hadnt worked... well ok i'm not trying to nitpick sorry. I think you have a good imagination for storywriting, this is an original idea as far as I can see, keep writing man.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story