Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 03-25-2008 20:19,   i enjoyed it although the meat of the story is something that hits a major artery with me...    the thing that got my attention was the convenience of her falling into a cave and taking a ladder back out of it into what appears to be a location close to where she started. i wonder if that made sense...    the cave to basement journey was too compressed, almost too complex - or something like that - i'll shut up now!    write on!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story