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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 03-25-2008 00:12,   this reminded me of the 'stones' story. i think that with some story lines, if i get it on the first trip - it wasn't deep enough (with the exception of non-rhyming poetry which is always too deep for me).    that might not have made sense...    this story took me a couple reads before i could "become" the character. i can see how ferfie got the icks, it is a very strong story - which means it worked!    write on!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story