Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine Hello all. Anna Devine (Sad Sara) and I have been... The Spiders and Johnny Bailes The greenfly were the first to vanish, and the...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Howler 03-24-2008 20:25,   ... Hi! Theme's good, and so is the flow. Characterization was cool; its a whole new perspective on 'god vs devil' plot. A few grammatical errors need to be corrected and it would be a much easier read if you could improve the flow of narration. But on the whole, this is a very good piece of work. Keep 'em coming! :)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story