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03-24-2008 09:44,
This could have been more like a story, though I enjoyed it all the same as a poem. My only desertion of this piece is that Father McCabe wouldn't have been so bold as to pull another girl into his office so quickly by just seeing her there at his door. Atleast I would think so,,,but it is just a poem,,,a rather good one at that.