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03-22-2008 19:17,
I agree with Tarhead, it was extremely thick. The only thing I would say that made me confused of the whole thing, would probably be the time transfer, such as him suddenly waking up to the married couple, then in their house. And maybe the coma usage didn't help too much, but I got the gist of it. I think it was a good piece about reality practically, and I like how it all took place in one night.