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03-22-2008 19:05,
There are so many quotes that just caught my eye and made me read them over and over again, whether long or short. These quotes were filled with imagery and a whole lot of depth.
Although, at the surface there didn't really seem to have any meaning to this story, it made me think incredibly for some odd reason. Of course I found enjoyment in that. I favored the symbolism a lot, and the only critical things that I could say were bad would be too long of sentences (or maybe too short), and the repeating of the money (practically what r. e. potter said). I think because I liked this story so much, I'm not able to find bad qualities about it.