Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Bronson1 03-22-2008 01:53,   ... Thanks, i'm very new to writing.    Have written a few others which i will post soon.    My main issue at the moment is trying to "show" what is happening not "tell" the reader what is happening.    Ant tips would br gratefully recieved.    Jim   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story