Awakening of Minds (part one)

So there I was, looking once more at the device...

The Melancholy Death of Anarchy Boy & Punk Rock Girl

"The Melancholy Death of Anarchy...


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Posted by Pez
03-21-2008 07:50,
 
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Should probably no be under Humor. 
 
Maybe, miscellaneous? 
 
It sort of obstructed the story, but to use, "I don't pick up hitchhikers anymore, " in the beginning of most of the paragraphs is a good way to hint on the drivers indecisiveness. 
 
A 2.5, maybe 3.
 
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