Drunk as a Skunk

The first time I got drunk, well ... it wasn't a...

Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine

Hello all. Anna Devine (Sad Sara) and I have been...


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Posted by nick711
03-20-2008 13:26,
 
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Eh. I hate to be a crab but I agree with Pez. The grammar errors made it very difficult to enjoy it although the story was sort of entertaining. A little too short though, to really understand what was happening. Hopefully you can build off this neat little story and make something larger.
 
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