The Lottery This is the story about Jack and Neal Who shook... Blue Room *authors note: hope everyone stilll likes it. i...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 03-20-2008 12:19,   this is actually three stories smacked together. i wrote the first one a while back, then the last one jumped into my head - i had to wait patiently for the middle to work itself out before i could i finish...    it's a lot to read (a little over 3,250 words), but i managed to get less than a 5% passive sentence count - that probably only means something to my little self...    thanks for the comments!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story