Her Magic Touch, Chapter 1

She's not very attractive. No, that isn't quite...

TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08)

It is not all fun being invisible, not all about...

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Posted by Pez
03-20-2008 08:07,
 
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There are too many spelling and grammar errors. They were sort of distracting. I can't take people that want to be writers seriously when they don't even have basic spelling and grammar down. I'm not just referring to you, but others, would you turn this in to your English teacher? Or a publisher? (Gee, this sounds familiar... I think Cookingwine is getting into my head). 
 
Maybe this site is all fun, I dunno... Oi, so cranky today. 
 
Haven't read a story about witches lately; I don't like them too much, but if you fix this or proofread the next part (I assume there might be a continuation?) I might read it. 
 
Good luck.
 
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