Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by chelsey89 03-20-2008 07:49,   ... Thank you for the comment. This is my first story, so I appreciate the constructive criticism on my writing and not just what the story is about. I have some more story ideas, so I will definitely spend more time writing them then I did with this one.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story