Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Carey Joyce 03-20-2008 07:39,   ... yes, I had a tough time making the action scenes flow well.     I wrote that several years ago, I came up with the whole sequence while sitting by myself at a sushi bar drinking a beer. So the restaurant described is a real place and those where the people there when I visualized it all.     and no, I'm not the next university shooter.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story