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03-20-2008 07:37,
Good anecdote(s).
We have a woman like that in my neighborhood. She is fat and sweaty; has a gray mushroom haircut. Clothing is always vibrant; her lipstick and eyeliner are poorly applied and always oozing down her face.
She is kind though... and she mostly wears a wondrous smile.
Think I'll actually say "hello" this time.
Your story-telling skills need improvement, but you will become better with practice; maybe invest more thought and time when you write a piece.
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