Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 03-20-2008 06:43,   ... Well of course i read this! It had 'Japanese' in the title!    Liked the ending (heh), but I know you could have made the action scenes flow nicer. With so many mindless violence out there, you should have made this one stand out.     I was trying to picture the whole thing in Anime-style, but you didn't quite take me there. Since it was all in his imagination, I would of thought it could of been so much more elaborate! But since it had some sort of a comedic effect, maybe you didn't want to make it too graphic(?).    Liked the part where he kicked the 2nd man's head through the glass door (got this crazy image in my head).    I'm sure you can exceed this.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story