|
|
|
Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Comment in question Go back to the story |
mXcomment 1.0.6 © 2007-2008 - visualclinic.fr
License Creative Commons - Some rights reserved

03-20-2008 01:49,
Yer imagery and word choices here added the 'Wow' factor to yer verse.
Sorrowful One, yer seem to know a thing or two about Angels, so I was wonderin' if yer knew if it was true what me mum tol' me when I was a lil' Pollyanna-
Here's what she tried to feed me while I was eatin' me Angel food cake one day she said: 'Pollyanna, did yer know that we only eat Angel food cake to get back at Angels fer eatin' people food cake?'
Of course I said nothing, because, well, I didn't talk till I was like eight years old unless I absolutely had to.
So I juss keep eatin' and thought: 'Those sick bastards are eatin' people'
Anyway, I'll be awaitin' fer yer Angelic cake wisdom in regards to me inquiry.
Loved yer verse
Take care,
'Anna