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03-20-2008 00:20,
Hah. Such a wonderful story. Great descriptions, the fight scenes were awesome, and by that I mean gruesome :) I would only suggest that you differentiate between those 3 men because it's hard to follow when they are referred to as, the 1st, 2nd etc. I also enjoyed the twist at the end. All in all, wonderful job. Keep it up.