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03-19-2008 16:04,
I read this 3 times and still don't understand the purchase price for the two chocolate bars. shouldn't it be two pennies short of two dollars?
the part about the head-on collision was interesting, but would be more so with more facts involved. you mention the weight of the vehicle which was good. maybe throw in the old "every 10 miles per hour in speed is like driving off a 1 story building, double the height for a head-on" supposedly this is true.
after reading it a few times I cant help but think of Patrick Bateman as a suburbanite.
I'm definetly adding this to my favorites, you have managed to combine the styles of my two favorite writers in this piece, Brett Easton Ellis and Chuck Palahniuk.
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