Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Munky 03-19-2008 02:58,   ... Intriguing story. You've got some really good ideas but I feel they need more developing. As I read through it, I felt that more cause-effect relationships should be given so as to provide a better understanding of everything that's going on. At present, it seems to me like bits and pieces. All in all, it was a nice read. Keep it up.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story