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10-07-2007 15:08,
Very good storyline... good concept... but could've been a little more descriptive. I was having hard time picturing how this troll looked like. He's big and scary looking... but what else makes this troll appear fearsome? Also i would've appreciated the story more if you could develop the bond between loki and sam more.
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