Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 03-18-2008 08:54,   pretty cool start i'd lose the broken wire and gain a loose connector -wires are hard to break in a controlled environment. i had some other thoughts as i read, but your story distracted me...    oh yeah, this line: being so far out meant he'd arrived before disaster struck - made me go, "huh?"    good writing! i'll read it again later to see if i can unlock my brain (it's a combination lock and i forgot to write the numbers down...)    write on!   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story