|
|
|
Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Comment in question Go back to the story |
mXcomment 1.0.6 © 2007-2008 - visualclinic.fr
License Creative Commons - Some rights reserved

03-17-2008 19:38,
Hm. Don't know what to think about it yet. I usually have too much to think about so I run out of room in the comment.
The only real complaint I could muster would be the adjective beatings. "stubby mound with five tentacles" for a hand is a little much for me, but that's just me.
I'd say it was good, aside from overly descriptive (and that varies on individuals, so tell it to fuck off sometimes).