Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 03-17-2008 10:12,   Good job. This was nice. I, for some reason, imagined everything to be very modern-day retro (?).    Twas beautiful.    Nice use of imagery. I felt the next stage in your dream push the one before it pretty vividly.     And I liked how you conjoined certain words to make phrases like:    "As the radio sends its sad songs  To sail the scented city air"    I could of done without the "sad" but it was pretty sweet.    Did this friend of yours move far away?   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story