Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by gsaracen 03-16-2008 18:06,   is it... is it that seeing him is too painful? hmmm....genuine emotion there. You might wanna concentrate more on the form than the content...after all...it is poetry, but anything you like is your expression!    Try a bit more flow and rythm... less prosaic and complete sentences in the verses? Or not! Poetry is self expression!    Keep it up.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story