Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 03-16-2008 08:56,   ... A lot of unnecessary words shot it for me.   "little by little her addiction shows on her face":  it's starting if it's little by little, if it's little by little, it's starting. redundancy. just cut the words that really don't have to be there and it will help. and get a drink.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story