Days of End (Mans past...Mans future ), Chapter 3

Trickles of light filtered in through the...

Pain

I cant sleep again. Its like this all the...


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Posted by erin
10-03-2007 04:17,
 
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It was good. I really think it needs to be developed more. Why all the sudden is he wanting to find God? Why after all those kills did he cry? Where is this emotion coming from. Good Story though!
 
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