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03-14-2008 23:19,
First this part from yer verse which I chose to highlight are me favorite:
your past is unfaithful, it has left you
yet again
as you read these
words.
reconcile
the past and move
on.
take
a
breath
Aye, very cool way to play the breath there, quite brill really.
This is an amazing verse, crave the way so to speak, I am rather fond of such a Poetic flow.
Y'gots it I tell yer,
Take care,
'Anna
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