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Posted by Sad Sara
03-14-2008 23:19,
 
Aye Tarnoggin'...
First this part from yer verse which I chose to highlight are me favorite: 
 
your past is unfaithful, it has left you  
yet again  
as you read these  
words.  
reconcile  
the past and move  
on.  
take  
a  
breath  
 
Aye, very cool way to play the breath there, quite brill really.  
 
This is an amazing verse, crave the way so to speak, I am rather fond of such a Poetic flow. 
Y'gots it I tell yer, 
Take care, 
'Anna
 
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