Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by gsaracen 03-12-2008 14:19,   ... there's a thread in the forum on the explicit issue... some guideline suggestions posted there too....    Yeah advice... the thing about poetry is it is 50% message and 50% form. (in my view...)    So flow, rythm, rhyme (if you want), and the "feel" of a verse really matters.    Sometimes you can delay a point or line you want to put in and put it in later... to achieve a rhyme in the "near term"... you dig?    A thesaurus can help LOADS with poetry. try thesaurus.com    This is just my gen advice I give to myself. your poem was not lacking.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story