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03-12-2008 12:50,
No it's not really about a lost love. This is mainly about just a person catching a glimpse of one of the most beautiful girls he has ever laid eyes on but he realizes he can never have her because she isn't like him. He thinks of her as an angel because her skin is so fair. And that's where the whole flying thing comes into play. He thinks she is an angel so he desires to fly up after her but he knows that he has no such ability.
And hey did you read my poem "The Good Soldier?" Remember you told me to write a happier poem. Well that's what I came up with. I don't know in my mind it leaves a happy feeling after reading it. So if you haven't i suggest you read it.